Случай в жизни на английском

i want to tell you about my favourite date. it was much time ago but i remember that day accurately. i was 14 years old and mt boyfriend was 16. he had dark hair and brown eyes. he was very sweet. i was a little shy. we met at a birthday party of our common friend. he offered to walk ever and i agreed. we walked throught the park in the evening. it was summer and a pleasant breeze blew over us. there were many loving couples and we were one of them. suddenly we heard the music. he took my hand and danced with me. oh, it was unfogettable! after a wonderful dance he kissed me! it was unexpected but at the same time really great. here it is my first love!