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People say that the weather could not be bad. but I want to disagree. It was last fall, I was at home and did the housework. The evening was quiet and warm. Nothing boded of trouble. Then suddenly a strong wind blew, and burst into the open window. It threw the papers in all the house. Outside, in air thunder was roared and became cold. Lightning flashed. powerful thunder forced all to get scared. Its strength was so great that trembled windows. I was very scared, and closed the window. one more lightning appeared. And more. The sky was like a saucer with cracked. outside became light as day, because of there was lightning flashes. This was a beautiful and terrible phenomenon of nature.

People say that the weather could not be bad. But I want to disagree. Люди говорят, что погода не бывает плохой. Но я хочу не согласиться (я бы сказала: But I disagree - Но я не согласен.)

It was last fall, I was at home and did the housework. - Это было прошлой осенью, я был дома и занимался домашними делами.

The evening was quiet and warm. - Вечер был спокойный и теплый. (Я бы сказала: It was quite and warm.)

Nothing boded of trouble. - Ничто не предвещало неприятностей. (Чаще: There were no signs of trouble.)

Then suddenly a strong wind blew, and it burst through the open window. - И вдруг подул сильный ветер, и ворвался в открытое окно.

It threw the papers about the house. - Он разбросал бумаги (документы) по всему дому.

Outside, thunder was roared and just became cold. - Снаружи прогремел гром, и сразу стало холодно.

The lightning flashed. - Сверкнула молния.

Powerful thunder forced all to get scared. - Мощный грохот заставил всех испугаться. (слишком по-русски, хотя с точки зрения грамматики все выдержано)

Its strength was so great that windows were trembled. - Его сила была настолько велика, что окна задрожали.

I was very scared, and I had to close the window. - Мне было очень страшно, и я вынужден был закрыть окно. (мне пришлось закрыть окно)

The lightning flashed once more. Then one more. - Снова сверкнула молния. Потом еще одна.

The sky was like a saucer with small and largecracks. - Небо было похоже на блюдце с малыми и большими трещинами.

It became light as a day in the street because of lightings. - На улице стало светло как днем из-за молний. (не очень уверена в этом предложении, тоже как-то очень по-русски)

This was a beautiful and terrible phenomenon of nature. - Это было красивое и страшное явление природы.

People say that there is no bad weather, but I disagree with this statement. It was last fall. I was at home and I set with my homework. The evening was quiet and warm. Nothing boded of forthcoming trouble. Suddenly a strong wind blew, and burst into the open window.

It threw the papers in all the house (Я так поняла, что ты хотела сказать, что ветер дунул и бумаги разлетелись по дому, если так, то можно сказать по-другому). The wind was so strong that all papers, which were on my table flew all over the house (room). Outside the thunder roared and became colder. Lightning flashed. Powerful thunder forced all to get scared. This strength was so great that windows were trembled. I was very scared, and closed the window. The lightning appeared more and more. The sky was like a saucer with cracks. The streat became light as day, there were a lot lightning flashes. It was a beautiful and terrible phenomenon of nature.