5-6 предложений на сочинение на английском на тему современные технологии хорошо или плохо

In the modern world, humanity uses in its activities, new technologies. Such as telephone, Internet, appliances, etc. All this is done for convenience, so that people could save time by quickly and efficiently to remember the necessary information or perform some action. All this makes life much easier and it certainly is a big plus. However, people have become dependent on the use of the Internet. They stopped doing physical work, because osnovy part of the work for them doing technology. If you want to do the housework - all makes technique. If you want to remember - all makes technique. People already can't imagine what he would do without the Internet, where at any time he may find useful sources.

Нормально? Это моё школьное сочинение, думал, не пригодится, а оказывается понадобился.