Сочинение на тему: Музыка в нашей жизни. 12-15 предложений, желательно незамысловатых.

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music it is a fantastik feel in our life. my favorit singer is EminEm. Hi is RAP singer, but rap is one of milion style in a music. rock became known in 50th. rap became known later than rock I think in 70th. the oldest style is classic music. дальше чего нибудь про разные стили понапиши, а в конце напиши так: I can't life without music. music is my life.